The words over at Three Word Wednesday are breach, ember and tentative. A poem? Sure, why not.
Awakenings
A tentative heart sings not,
no music in its everyday beat,
shy and shaded, it but does it’s job
There’s an ember in a glance,
a beat that skips, not just once,
heat, flush, emotions are awakened
A tentative heart, breached,
uneasy, like a baby’s first steps,
there’s rhythm now, a sing-song,
love’s awakening, rich, unpredictable
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7 comments:
This flows beautifully, Thom; and the last couple of lines are simple, brilliant, true.
nice, like the way this moves, makes my heart beat a little faster too
amazing word flow.
amazing word flow.
Awakening ... an unfolding. Thanks for sharing :)
peace,
deborah
Sure why not? Nicely said Thom!
I like the idea that love gives your heart a song and it certainly is rich and unpredictable.
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