The words over at Three Word Wednesday are bait, jump and victim.
Snare
I work through the growing dusk to set and bait the traps.
A dozen in all, set strategically along traditional migration paths.
Simple snares really, nothing that’s going to trap an appendage and cause any damage to my intended victims. Hell, I don’t even use baling wire for fear of damaging their supple skin.
I fashion the snare loops out of the softest nylon parachute cord I can find, in muted colors that blend into soft summer grasses.
It has cost me three weeks allowance to bait the traps, which is a minor annoyance, but you really can’t scrimp in circumstances such as these. Hair ribbons, nail polish in several trendy colors, eye liner, toe rings (yeah, I know, rings for toes; in consultation with my sister, which cost me five bucks by the way, she said the little rings of silver were “hot”).
Traps set, I sit Indian-style behind old man Taylors hydrangea bush and commence to eat a peanut butter and banana sandwich.
And wait it out for a snare to tighten around a sinuous wrist or ankle, the ensuing commotion triggering a tiny bell to jump and jangle, announcing a successful entrapment.
The evening is a hot and humid; there’s a scant breeze, but not enough for the neighborhood, which seems tired and a little defeated during this extended heat wave. People evacuate their porches, extinguish lights, and move conversation and Cribbage games into air-conditioned family rooms.
Good for me. Less commotion, less prying eyes.
The air is heavy, and for now the only sounds come from the buzzing of bugs, or the odd bark of a dog startled by the hum of a settling evening.
I’m nearly dozing when a bell sets to clanging. It’s the one I was hoping for, the snare that’s positioned near the Beckford place, near Mrs. Beckfords spread of expensive rose bushes.
I rush off down the sidewalk, the rubber of my tennis shoes making echoed clomps on the concrete, and race toward the snare, the now-silent bell. Hell, I hope I'm not too late.
Beth Myerson’s face is a mix of shock and irritation. She’s got her hands on her hips, on a bare patch of perfectly smooth, sun-kissed flesh between where her Capri’s stop and her short, white sleeveless blouse starts. The snare digs slightly at her right wrist, making a white mark below the rope, and an angry rose color above it when the blood is pooling.
She sees me, unclenches her teeth. The scowl evens out, blossoms into a toothy grin.
“Hey,” she says.
“Hey.”
She tosses a vial of nail polish at me.
“You want to help paint my toenails?”
And my heart melts a little.
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24 comments:
That is quite a catch - and ending.
Excellent and surreal.
That got me chuckling. The guy does know how to trap his prey. Does this mean, he did all of this so he could get a chance to paint her toes? Nicely Penned.
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This has a very creepy undertone. It balances innocence with something very different than innocence. Like, something scary. And it's full of fabulous detail.
I knew you were headed there..a cool ride none the less..
do innocent little boys do all this just to get some pretty girl to ask him to paint her toenails? I fear he's a slave to her already, great story
It's slick an' sick, but it was a bit telegraphed I felt.
Marc Nash
I was expecting something a little more sinister at the end, so the cute ending was a nice surprise.
I think this little boy has a future as a stalker. Ha ha.
Light-hearted and fun, while, as said above, containing creepy undertones.
I agree with Jen...the undertones aren't good for this boy as he gets older...
I totally like the ending. Definitely not what I was expecting. Something that could have gone oh so wrong ended up very sweet.
Very well written.
I may a little sick myself but I loved it. Kind of a modern day Tom Sawyer little fella with big aspirations and personally I think he is going to go far! Great one, Thom :)
Yikes. Thom, you have a wierd
imagination - however your stories
never let me leave them until the
end - and a welcome, funny end
it was.
Sick little hunter, but the victim loves to be caught. Dark undertones to a lighthearted finish.
Pretty imaginative :)
*chortle!* A delightful and oh-so-imaginative tale. I loved it!
This was a cute one. I agree with others that there is a bit of a creepy undertone to it, but for now it stays cute. Good story!
It started with a interesting saga of catchment and towards the end , that description was quite poetic. Well, you merged two aspects into one. Well, girls will be proud to have you to describe them. Well, interesting post. :)
wow - if that is an imagination - i m threatened by it totally!
No More A Victim
Can't beat a little touch of the surreal on a Saturday afternoon!
And I agree this young man might well grow into a stalker...
That was an interesting ending
You have a great way with description. Concur with others on the ending :)
I love a happy twist. Don't see enough of them. Really good writing.
I was sure I knew where the story was going (and I was right), but it still had a twist ending. Good one, ThomG!
Tight happy writing + wondermous ending = great flash! Really enjoyed this. peace...
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