Week 25 of the NaiSaiKu Challenge.
toes dipped gingerly,
salty surf roils, carries scent,
spongy footfalls fade
SUN’S BALMY EMBRACE
spongy footfalls fade,
salty surf roils, carries scent,
toes dipped gingerly
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5 hours ago
3 comments:
Yum. What a mix of words here. You appear to be a very tactile poet!
This one makes my tongue happy.
Toes dipped gingerly, makes me wanna go to the beach!
What wonderful summer images evoked with your piece. I do love the beach! Although it's Sunday (rather than Tuesday) I did give NaiSaiKu a try just now at Small Reflections and HOPE I did it right ;--)
Hugs and blessings,
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