The words over at Three Word Wednesday are cradle, perfect and snare.
Snare
My father hears my commotions coming from the garage, but lets me fumble to my own devices.
It's only when I emerge, an armload of stuff clutched to my chest, does he find his full interest. He’s sitting on the porch, sipping iced tea and smoking a pipe.
“Say there boy, what’s with all the stuff?”
“I’d rather not talk about it.”
That’s when he sees the shiner, a raccoon-ringed black eye. My eye. He whistles a cat-call, puts on his half-readers to get a better look.
“Whoa, boy, who gave you that?”
“Emma Tellford.”
He puts his fingers to his lips like he’s contemplating the moment, but I know better. He’s stifling a guffaw.
“I told you I don’t want to talk about it.”
I dump the stuff in the yard, a saw, hammer, length of wire, an old bicycle tube, a box of screws, some two-by-four scraps.
“You know, if you told me what you were making, I could possibly be of some assistance.”
“It’s a booby trap,” I say. “For Emma.”
Father slides off his readers, goes all serious.
“Son, you’ll not want a box trap and don’t even consider something dangerous, like punji sticks. What you need is a good snare. Trust me, it’s how I met your mother.”
And we set off to the garage to build some.
“The trick is to catch them, but without harm,” he says, rigging an elaborate loop of braided wire. “In your mother’s dresser you’re find her hair ribbons, the silk ones. Go fetch a couple.”
When we’re finished, he puts his calloused hands on my shoulders and offers up words of advice. Tension requirements to trip up a 12-year-old girl. Where best to put the devices. What to use for bait.
“What to say when you’ve got her, well, I’m afraid that is up to you.”
I set the snares and cradle myself within a honeysuckle bush, thick with sweet blossoms and the buzzing of bees. Waiting for Emma Tellford, daring her in to walk my way.
I’m curled into a ball, sleeping off the worst heat of the day, when a little bell tied to one of the snares begins to the ring. I tear from my hiding place and skid to a stop, dust rising around my sneakers.
There, hanging defiant and upside-down in the humid air is Emma Tellford. The snare has her by a tanned ankle. She’s got her arms crossed at her chest. Her sandy pigtails whip and bob with the movements of her body.
Her floral sundress has slipped, exposing her white panties, her smooth, tanned stomach.
But it’s not the panties where I find focus. It’s her navel. Not really an innie. Not quite an outie. It’s perfect in its uneven attractiveness.
And I’m smitten.
“Hi,” I say.
“Hi yourself,” she says with a slowly spreading smile, which replaces a stern hump of furrowed brow.
“I know where there’s a pond full of tadpoles,” I say, knowingly. “Wanna see?”
“Yes, please,” she says, and with a swing of her arms, begins to dance in midair.
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27 comments:
I'm gonna make one just like it!
oooohhh that is swingin :)
Now that's an excellent idea. Love it.
I love the way you twist your writing. I never where your your going to jump. That is what makes enjoyable reading. I'll do my 3 words later this week.
I love this. I could so see myself as the boy. Wonderful yarn...
Haha--
now I know what those boys are up to, hanging around in the garage!!
nice write!
Wonderful. You really paint a picture with this story, put me right there in it when I read it. The story itself is great, plus the metaphor of the situation "in the snare of love".
This was absolutely delightful to read...the details are so vivid and put you right there as if you're living it.
"And I shook it at her and said this snakes for you!" Outrageous and wonderful - I can just see them running off to the pond to live happily ever after, at least till dark :)
oh my, this has me smiling sweetly. Simply ingenious~
This is fabulous! I love the light of it.
How cute!
Of course you knew I'd love, love, love this piece. I'm totally head over heels with your storytelling abilities. You know, Sophia won't wear dresses anymore. She refuses to for the exact reason you wrote about. She doesn't want any boys to get a glimpse of her panties or her belly button while she's climbing trees or kicking them in the ribs! And you should see the boys that are lined up these days, hoping she'll kick them in the ribs. It's shocking!
You're brilliant, T-Daddy.
Novel idea - well written and a full house read!
:) that was a sweet story! could hardly wait to see what happened:)
Very nicely written
"It’s perfect in its uneven attractiveness.
And I'm smitten."
Adorably sweet!
Nice one
If only love were so simple! This is a funny and tender story. Very nicely done.
Great story, so visual!
LOL!!! Very good read!! I could easily visualize as I read along. Great work.
now, that's one way to get a date, great story, I wonder if Emma enjoyed hanging upside down...what boys will do...
This couldn't have been more picturesque.
As always you excel at storytelling
~Harsha
post snare instructions...
if it can catch a sly one, I could use it.
This made me laugh.
That was a heartwarming little tale, Thommy! Smitten with her belly button!? I loved that twist!
That was indeed a cute tale....pond full of tadpoles...brought a huge grin here:)
Good read.
That was indeed a cute tale....pond full of tadpoles...brought a huge grin here:)
Good read.
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