Tough day at OneWord. Twine. Yikes. Here's what I came up with, in 60 seconds:
The ball in the pit of his stomach began to unravel, something akin to dropping a bundle of twine off a balcony. A long strand of worry, growing by the foot. He'd tried antacids, tonics. What he needed was salvation.
He needed to forgive.
#FridayFlash: The Revenge Engine
1 hour ago
6 comments:
Great image! and in 60 seconds, no less.
I deeply enjoy the way you perceive life. This is wonderful.
not bad for 60 seconds. think what you could have accomplished in 61
Have wandered over from Tammie Lee's blog. Always in the mood for writing that moves me, rattles me, takes me away. And here you are - hooray!
i like the twine being emotions.
my thoughts would have gone to gardening.
wow I'm with Grizz - what would you have done with more time! "A long strand of worry, growing by the foot" - We've all had nights of that.
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