Written for the NaiSaiKu Challenge. A fun way to stretch your poetry legs, there.
quiet permeates,
solitude, a cold comfort,
life’s little blunders,
KNOCKING AT YOUR DOOR
life’s little blunders,
solitude, a cold comfort,
silence saturates
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3 comments:
Hi Thom, thanks for playing, silence saturates, don't it just!
Loved the closing and the opening..
The Stone Diaries by Carol Shields
quiet permeates
silence saturates
Nice on the tongue.
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