It’s Tuesday, the day when people start posting for the NaiSaiKu Challenge. It’s a poem with a strict syllable count. The title is the third line, in all caps. An interesting exercise. Try creating one yourself.
Thunderclouds posture,
rain taints the air with sweetness,
lightening cackles,
WATCHING SPRING SHOWERS
lightening cackles,
rain taints the air with sweetness,
thunderclouds posture
No Laughing Gas Matter - Friday Flash
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6 comments:
wow... I could already hear the thunderclouds... :)
beautifully penned... :)
Hi Thom, sounds like our April showers!
Send those here. It is VERY hot!
pot pourri
This is a lyrical Naisaiku.
We've also had the showers over the last few days.
We had a few showers last week too. It's a happy poem.
..thanks for this well written verse thom - enjoyed it ..
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