Wednesday's Three Word Wednesday

The words over at Three Word Wednesday are caress, jagged and ruthless.

Homeland Security
My mother stands on the apex of the jagged hillside behind the barn, blowing a tarnished bugle.
Breathless as I crest the hill, I see her concern: hundreds of Imperial Japanese troops amassing at the border of the farm, in old man Jenkins’s alfalfa field.
“The big sneaks,” she says, sneering around father’s corncob pipe. “So much for the treaty of ’04.”
The alfalfa field is awash in men in olive-drab uniforms, brass buttons that glint in the sun. Bayonets are attached to their Arisaka rifles. Battle lines are being formed.
“No cannons – yet,” mother says. “Looks like they want to fight close-in, close contact. We just might have a chance.”
We rush down the path to the farmhouse, my mother’s hand pressed between my shoulder blades and propels me forward with earnest. She opens the big steamer chest in the parlor and takes out my father’s double-barreled flintlock pistols and hands them to me, which I tuck into the waistband of my jeans. She retrieves her Hawken .50-caliber rifle from over the hearth, slings the deerskin satchel that holds her wadding and lead rounds, slings her power horn. Into the pockets of her apron, she secures her Chippewa tomahawk and a weathered Bowie knife with its elk-horn handle.
“Those Imperialists are ruthless,” she says. “Best you should know that going in.”
Tears begin to stream down my face. With her thumbs, she caresses the wetness into my cheeks. She puts a hand under my chin, taps my nose with her delicate index finger.
And snaps her fingers.
She reaches into the steamer chest, brings out a square of red velvet and unwraps two jeweled daggers. The most beautiful weapons I have ever laid eyes on. I hold out my hands and she presses a leather-wrapped handle into each palm.
“These were your father’s,” she says. “He used them to repel the Cossacks in ’92.”

15 comments:

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Love alternate history. Makes you think.

Rose

xo

myrtle beached whale said...

Great story. I enjoyed the feeling of being pulled into another dimension. Thanks for visiting my blog. I responded to your comments there.

anthonynorth said...

Some wonderful images in this. I'm sure I've been close to that coming battle :-)

Lucy said...

great story Thom, i was hoping at the end it was a game of pretend.
:)

Pretty Me!! said...

too good :)

Tumblewords: said...

Glad I got to take this ride - great read!

floreta said...

i like the mother character. she seems tough!

Jeeves said...

Nice one

susan said...

You a master storyteller. When you're an old man (long way off) you should read for children at the library. Don't scoff. Kids are the keenest critics and a helluva lot of fun. Anyhoo, enjoyed as always. Like the layout change.

Peace,
s

Ann said...

Fun little story. I like the way you skirt the edges of absurdity, teasing, but refusing to jump all the way in.

Fledgling Poet said...

Your characters really came alive, just in that short piece. I wanted to keep reading more!

Jane Doe said...

A great story crafted with skill, filled with vivid imagery. I like this piece a lot. I love what you did with the prompt.

pjd said...

The tears really threw me, brought it home. Then the "tough it out, kid, this is your lot in life" response. Another fine entry this week.

angie said...

For a minute there, I thought you knew my grandmother!
Love it--and I betcha Bowie knives and daggers probably work a bit better than duct tape.

Sepiru Chris said...

Wow, what a great bit of writing; I want to buy the rest of the book...

I think I am now understanding my confusion. PJD, if I am correct, uses the 3WW for haiku, and everyone else uses it for general writing. I am such a dolt sometimes.

Tschüss,
Chris